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2023年6月24日雅思写作考试已经结束，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作小作文：对比以前和现在码头的变迁范文，供雅思考生参考。
点击查看》》》6月24日雅思写作小作文回忆:对比以前和现在码头的变迁。
【图形分类】
地图题
【题目解析】
图中说明的是Liverton码头的变化，从时间来看，第一幅图表示的是1980年的情况，需要使用一般过去时。第二幅图是现在的情况，可以使用一般现在时或现在完成时。
可以分区域进行分段，进行过去和现在的比较；也可以按照一图一段的方式安排结构。
【写作思路】
开头段：转述题目
主体段1: 介绍码头1980年的情况。整个码头包括南北两边，中间水体部分通行船只，两岸有仓库，并且每个仓库附近都有一个起重机
主体段2: 介绍如今的情况。水体部分不再通船，新建了一个ship museum，并且新建了桥梁和flood barrier。在北部码头上，原来的仓库变成了教育中心，旁边新建了sailing club和kid’s playing area。南部码头的仓库改建为apartments，两旁为hotel和parking
总结段：Liverton码头发生了很大的改变，从一个普通的码头变成了具有多重功能的设施
【参考范文】：
The maps illustrate the transformation that has taken place in Liverton docks since 1980, showcasing significant changes over the decades.
In 1980, Liverton docks consisted of two sections: the northern and southern docks. A water area separated the docks, with designated lanes for ships entering or leaving the coast. The primary structures in the area were warehouses, with two located in the north and one in the south. Adjacent to each warehouse, there was a crane.
Today, Liverton docks have undergone extensive redevelopment and have become a versatile recreational area. A new bridge has been constructed over the river, connecting the docks near the coast. Additionally, a flood barrier has been erected to the east of the bridge. The water area no longer accommodates ship traffic, but instead features a ship museum adjacent to the northern dock. The former warehouse in this vicinity has been repurposed as an education center and towards the east of it, there is a sailing club and a designated play area for children.
Overall, Liverton docks have been redeveloped significantly since the 1980s. They have transitioned from being a conventional dock to a multifunctional area serving educational, recreational, and residential purposes.
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【单词积累】
transformation 转变
showcase 展示
consist of 由…组成
designate v. 指定，选定
lane n.车道，航道
adjacent to adj. 邻近的
crane n. 起重机
undergo v. 经历经受（变化）
extensive adj. 广大的，大规模的
versatile adj （建筑）多用途的，多功能的；（人）多才多艺的
recreational adj. 娱乐的
erect v. 建立建造
feature v. 以…为特色，以…为主要组成
repurpose v.（为适应新用途）改动
transition n. 转变
conventional adj. 常规的，依照惯例的
multifunctional adj. 多功能的
serve … purpose
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