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发表于 2021-7-5 18:05:09 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  Companies should encourage employees who work in a high position to leave   at the age of 55 in order to give opportunities to the new generation.
  To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
  Model Answer:
  I totally disagree with the idea of high-level employees leaving at the age   of 55 to make room for the upcoming generation. While it is true that the energy   level and fresh ideas of youth can rejuvenate a company, the steady hand of   experience can still best guide a company in most cases.
  In English there is a saying, “You can’t teach an old dog new tricks.” In   the fast-paced world of business, bolstered by even faster hi-tech innovations,   a younger more pliant mind would seem to be able to adapt with greater   flexibility, while such an environment might boggle an older more   set-in-its-ways mind. Take, for example, Microsoft’s Bill Gates, whose energy   and brilliant insights as a youth helped him to pioneer new territory in the   computer software world and establish a digital empire. Now as a more mature   CEO, this king of the “computer” mountain is constantly on the verge of being   knocked down by upcoming digeratti entrepreneurs. However, it is now the   experience he has accumulated as an older man which keeps him on top. So,   combining the vigour and innovation of younger workers with the experience of   older workers would seem to be the winning hand in the world of business.
  The assertion is to give opportunities to the younger generation. If   everyone retires at 55, there will be smaller pool of experience at the company.   So, who will show them the ropes of the trade? It would be as if we lopped off   the last few chapters of a textbook. On this point the argument would seem to be   built on false presumptions.
  And think of all the other problems retirement at 55 would create. With   life expectancy in many advanced nations at 70-plus years, how would the state   along with private enterprises be able to support their retirement pensions? The   economic repercussions of such an idea could be great.
  Besides, the Western form of capitalism is built on competition and merit   and not seniority according to age, and democracy is built on equality for all   regardless of one’s age, so the argument clearly goes against these two pillars   of Western society.
  Granted, my counter-arguments are perhaps as simplistic as the original   assertion itself, but without qualifying the assertion with greater supporting   evidence or background information, both sides can be argued. Nevertheless, even   after thoroughly considering the argument, I believe I would still adhere to my   viewpoint that the assertion lacks merit for the aforementioned reasons.   Besides, when I am 55 I do not fancy the idea of being put out to pasture. I   think I will still be full of vitality and have a desire to work, so I hope my   workplace will view me as a treasure house of valuable experience to pass along   to the next generation and keep me on until I am at least 65 if not older.
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