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雅思写作大作文范文，关于家庭或外面世界对孩子的影响的话题，同学们可以参考思路并模仿亮点词句。
Although family has a
great influence on children’s life, it is the influence of outside the home that
plays a bigger part in their development.
To what extent do you
agree or disagree?
It is argued that children are more likely to be impacted by the outside
world compared with the influence from their family. Personally, I totally
concur with this statement because the academic knowledge and social skills they
can acquire from the wider community are more significant to their life-time
development than what is provided at home.
Regarding children’s intellectual development, teachers play a more crucial
role than parents do. Teachers are known to have to ability to impart knowledge
to children of different subjects. In math classes, for example, students are
taught algebra and functions, which exercise children’s logical thinking.
Similarly, taking history classes allows children to analyse the causes and
effects of historical events, helping them improve their analytical skills and
critical-thinking ability. These skills are significant in children’s continuous
education and future employment. The majority of parents, however, are not able
to do so as they are not experts in such areas, thereby being less influential
on children’s further advancement.
Additionally, social skills and collaborative skills, which facilitate
children’s future development can, to a larger extent, be cultivated via
socialising with peers at school or participating in various activities rather
than the interaction with parents. On campus, children may have conflict with
their schoolmates, but will gradually understand and learn the way to get along
with others if some of their behaviour prevents them from making friends.
Meanwhile, there are many activities requiring cooperation, through which
children can have an appreciation of teamwork. In contrast, family members
shower children with endless love, seldom requiring them to share what they have
and always helping them to do everything possible, which is of no benefit to
children’s development.
In conclusion, I strongly agree that the world outside home weighs more
than parents in children’s development. After all, the important factors in
children’s growth, including intellectual development, social skills and
collaborative skills can mostly be nurtured beyond a family setting.
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