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雅思写作大作文范文，关于父母教育减少青少年犯罪的话题，同学们可以参考思路并模仿亮点词句。
The only way to solve the increasing crime rate of young offenders is to
teach parents better parenting skills.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that it is only when parents are taught how to educate
and guide their offspring in a more effective way that will the number of
adolescents committing crimes decrease. Personally, I totally disagree with this
statement; in other words, there is more to reducing juvenile delinquency than
better parenting skills, including a decent length of time at school and serious
punishment.
There is high possibility that 10-12-years of compulsory schooling can
effectively prevent teenagers from turning to criminal activities. When they are
required to attend school, children who are in their formative years and
psychologically immature have less chance of making friends with hooligans who
might encourage them to commit crimes. Meanwhile, correct values and the
knowledge about laws and regulations can be delivered to children through some
crime-prevention programmes organised by their school. After that, they will
have the ability to distinguish right from wrong, and apparently not take part
in criminal acts.
Additionally, if harsh sanctions were imposed on young offenders, teenage
crime could be addressed as well. Those who have received strict punishment will
not re-offend because they are not willing to once again bear the suffering they
have experienced. This practice can also be seen as a deterrent to potential
criminals. If anyone who commits a crime, be it severe or minor, is severely
punished, those intending to involve themselves in some lawbreaking events may
feel frightened and refrain from participating in any illegal activities.
In conclusion, I have strong opposition to the viewpoint that teaching
young people to become law-abiding citizens can merely be achieved through
parents’ effort. In fact, many other measures can also be adopted to minimise
the proportion of young convicts, such as the provision of adequate amount of
school education and the implementation of stiff punishment.
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