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2022年8月13日雅思写作考试已经结束啦，小编搜集整理了本次雅思写作task2：消费品生产的增加导致环境破坏相关范文，供雅思考生参考。
WRITING TASK 2
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic:
The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment.
What are the causes of this?
What can be done to solve this problem?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
【话题分类】
消费+环境 话题结合；
【题目解析】
从题型上来看，属于是报告类/说明文（report）的类型。题目大意为消费品生产的增加导致了对于环境的破坏。这个情况的原因是什么？应该如何来解决？
作为一个环境类话题，该题目难度中等，这个题目的思路和内容并不会出现难以构思，可以从生产需要能源/资源，会产生污染以及生产的产品过剩导致浪费和进一步污染环境等方面入手，联想常见环境问题即可。
【写作思路】
开头段：改写题目并简单对两个问题进行回应。
主体段1: 给出生产活动增加造成环境破坏的原因。其中包括对于资源的需求增加，产生的污染增多以及过量产品的丢弃问题。
主体段2: 提供解决方案。政府需要制定政策约束企业生产行为。需要更多升级生产设备来实现绿色生产，减少能源使用。消费者需要意识到自己的行为后果，并且更理智地进行消费。
结尾段： 表明对于环境的危害很大，需要采取行动来应对。
【参考范文】
Manufacturing activities have been expanding in recent years to promote consumption. However, such expansion has taken its toll on the environment. There are various reasons for this problem and measures are required to solve it.
As modern consumers are increasingly obsessed with material enjoyment, the rising demand pushes companies to scale up their production for more profit. This development gives rise to the exploitation of natural resources and the generation of pollution in many forms, which would exacerbate the already severe environmental problems. For instance, the rising supply of meat and dairy products is directly responsible for climate change as livestock is a significant source of greenhouse gas emissions. Apart from that, manufacturing other consumer goods such as clothing and appliances entails the usage of chemicals that can pollute nature. Also, the surplus stock would also be a considerable environmental concern because it is often discarded, ending up in landfill sites or other random places to have a repercussion on wildlife that inhabits there.
To solve this problem, concerted efforts from governments, businesses, and individuals are necessary. It is vitally important for governments to introduce policies to regulate industrial production, requiring companies to shoulder the social responsibility of minimizing pollution and carbon emission. Additionally, more attention should be paid to updating machinery and equipment for green production and recycling, which could not only reduce environmental impacts but also contribute to a country’s sustainable development in the long run. Finally, consumers should understand the impacts of consumerism and make sensible purchasing decisions. Efforts such as opting for durable goods and supporting environmental-friendly products could be conducive to environmental protection.
In conclusion, manufacturing more consumer goods could be detrimental in many aspects, and measures from various sides should be implemented for the sake of nature and human beings.
（297 words）
【语言积累】
expand v. 扩张
take its toll on 产生恶果
be obsessed with 对…痴迷的
material enjoyment 物质享受
scale up 升级
give rise to 导致
exploitation 利用，开发
exacerbate 恶化，加重
severe 严重的，严峻的
dairy products 乳制品
be responsible for 对…负有责任
livestock 家畜
entail 牵涉，使必要 |
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