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A lot of people believe that the amount of violence shown on TV and in the
cinema affects the actions of our young people and therefore increases the
amount of violence in our society today.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? What can be done to reduce
violence in our society today?
Model Answer:
The question of whether the amount of violence on TV and cinema has
affected young people in our society is something which cannot be quantified or
proved. My opinion is though that the answer is “yes, it has”.
TV and cinema today do show a large amount of violence and, although we try
and shield our young people from seeing too much, they still get to watch it. At
the age of eighteen in my country they can see everything anyway. Violence on
the streets has increased. That has been proved. The connection between TV‛s and
the cinema‛s obsession with violence and today‛s street violence cannot be
proved but it is logical that the two are connected. Young people imitate what
they see and it is logical that they see glamour in what they do when they
commit violence.
How can we lessen violence? Reducing the amount of violence on TV and in
the cinema would certainly be a good start. Being more vigilant about what age
children are when they see violence in these media, and raising the age limits
would also help. Another good idea would be to channel the violence of young
people. I don‛t think that national service should be re-established in this
country but, if people are convicted of violence and sent to prison, then why
not give them the option of serving in the army. Their violence will be
controlled and they will be subjected to discipline so that they will be better
able to control themselves when they leave.
Thus I agree with the statement that cinema and TV violence affects the
young people in our society. There are some things that can be done to better
the situation but I doubt whether anything will be done.
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