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雅思大作文范文:父母和学校教育孩子成才

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发表于 2022-4-10 20:38:13 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Top雅思在线雅思为同学们整理了雅思大作文范文之父母和学校教育孩子成才,供考生参考学习。
雅思大作文题目:
Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
题目大意
有些人认为父母应该教孩子如何成为一个好的社会公民。然而其他人认为学校是学习这一点的地方。讨论双方观点并给出自己的观点。
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While education has long been recognized as paramount for children’s development, the problem of who should be responsible for the future of children has never reached an agreement. Whereas some consider it as parents’ obligation, others stick to the opinion that schools should have their role to play in cultivating children to be a good social member. Personally speaking, I tend to support the latter point of view, considering the advantages of schools in the cultivation of academic knowledge and social skills.   
It is easy for some people to laud parents’ value in educating children to be a good social member, though it works with enlightening education in childhood. While at early age, young children are more likely to establish these values from the role modelling from adults, that’s why parenting can play its part. Given that parents are the first educator for the next generation, the way they think, speak and behavior does exert long term influence on their offspring, particularly in the cultivation of conscience, personality and outlook on the society. All of these features will accompany children for the rest of their life, regulating their behavior.  
However, this is not how it seems in the eyes of others, who attribute children’s development to schooling. Compared with parenting, the first advantage of the school lays emphasis on academic education, which is inextricably bound up with the future career of students. After all, it is not social etiquette but academic achievements that decide which university students could go.
Apart from that, another factor exclusive to school is the social ability. Since the first day they step into campus, students are exposed to a wide variety of peers and teachers from various backgrounds. Such an environment will provide opportunities for them to learn communication skills and deal with different problems in interpersonal contact. All of these capabilities are imperative to be a good member of adult society and cannot be acquired by solely communicating with parents.
Although parenting has its part to play in children’s education, I would argue that the school should be more important for the them to be a useful talent in society, because it provides students with a more comprehensive capability than parents do.
相关词汇和语法结构
Paramount  至高无上的,首要的
obligation    义务,责任
cultivation   耕种,种植
academic   学术的
enlightening education    启蒙教育
role modelling   角色扮演
offspring   孩子,子女,后代
conscience   良心,良知
emphasis   强调
social etiquette   社交礼仪
imperative   重要紧急的
comprehensive   综合的
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